Chapter 1

Dear diary ,

I am Ralph and I experienced a plane getting cut in half and I think I saw the plane's front half on fire. I am 12 years old and I have blond hair. I forgot to tell you that my dad is a commander in the navy. I think that we should make a fire so planes or boats could see us on the island and that we need help to get of the island. I think I should give piggy the job to get the names of the people on the island. I saw a pig today and jack scared the pig away.

I am from England and I meet piggy and I went to explore the island and we found more people on the island from the plane crash. I met jack and a few other people on the island  and jack thinks that he is a good leader. I think that jack should be a hunter. I do not know why jack wants to kill the pig so bad. I do not know why jack is trying to look or act like he is a leader.

I think I know why Jack is trying to be the leader because he think that because he is the tallest and the lead choir boy he can be the leader. Roger wanted to take a vote to see who was the leader and to make it fair. Jack is trying way to hard to become the leader of the group on the island. This is why I think jack should not be the leader.


                                                                                                                        Ralph  

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  1. Lord of the Flies ZacharyMarch 30, 2017 at 5:56 AM

    This blog is good. I could tell what character you were trying to portray. And good job writing this blog with the grammar as well.

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  2. Lord of the FliesMarch 30, 2017 at 5:13 PM

    This blog is great. I could tell who you were by your description. Good job with the grammar and spelling.

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